https://sivertimes.com/kylie-jenner-becomes-the-laughing-stock-of-the-web-because-of-a-new-photoshop-fail/14698 news and analytics Mon, 13 Feb 2017 07:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://sivertimes.com/kylie-jenner-becomes-the-laughing-stock-of-the-web-because-of-a-new-photoshop-fail/14698#comment-750 Mon, 13 Feb 2017 07:54:00 +0000 http://sivertimes.com/?p=14698#comment-750 “Anyway, it did not fail to laugh surfers trying to determine what Kylie Jenner had on his knee”
Please ask your editor to help you learn, and watch out for your use of pronouns.
You are using “his” for women, and “her” for men.
In the sentence above, you’re speaking about Kylie Jenner, but you use the pronoun “his”. This makes reading your writing difficult.
Originally, your writing about Ariana Grande exposed your troubles with writing. Your article on her, “Dangerous Woman” tour was extremely difficult to understand. I still don’t know who she had on the stage with her.

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